tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post9061843609153256700..comments2013-05-02T00:07:35.812-07:00Comments on Floriferous: The Way LIfe IS..florahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15330772525133881587noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-58940510060840938272008-03-08T06:24:00.000-08:002008-03-08T06:24:00.000-08:00im not d old poem writter i used to b..last time c...im not d old poem writter i used to b..last time can write everyday n all nice wan..now write once a blue moon like crap..like u said, no feelings to it..how sad...hmmmflorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15330772525133881587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-53713183857064578252008-03-07T05:44:00.000-08:002008-03-07T05:44:00.000-08:00hahahaha.damn wey,ur fren poem so damn funny and r...hahahaha.damn wey,ur fren poem so damn funny and rhymes too...damn...i like it...hahaha..anyway,ur poem not bad..but tak cukup feel lagi...need more meaning...then sure damn cun 1...darrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13042145766103731242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-18143661867007625612008-03-05T14:23:00.000-08:002008-03-05T14:23:00.000-08:00where got emo..considered quite un-emo d la..hahah...where got emo..considered quite un-emo d la..hahahah..but it was darn funny i tell u..at least it woke me up..was super lazy to get out of bed..seriously...florahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15330772525133881587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-20814737801544143172008-03-05T09:18:00.000-08:002008-03-05T09:18:00.000-08:00epp~! I didnt know Jason commented...WhaT I said e...epp~! I didnt know Jason commented...WhaT I said earlier was about cursebreaker's comment...not Jason's...but...I think you can tell I cant possibly mean that Jason's comment is pro right?? HAHAHAHA...though its dead funny laa!...my...it rhymes too! hahahaha...§oŁЇtǺ®ÿ ®o§ěhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06551413175407908427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-86829895823758140002008-03-05T09:01:00.000-08:002008-03-05T09:01:00.000-08:00his advice...very the pro advice....I should do th...his advice...very the pro advice....I should do that too next time...*ahem*§oŁЇtǺ®ÿ ®o§ěhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06551413175407908427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-75040749935488712762008-03-05T08:00:00.000-08:002008-03-05T08:00:00.000-08:00so EMOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....hahaha...put la happier poe...so EMOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....hahaha...put la happier poem...something like<BR/><BR/>Here I sit,<BR/>Broken hearted,<BR/>Wanted to shit,<BR/>But only farted.mysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05687551912937456357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-64300588441283779092008-03-05T06:43:00.000-08:002008-03-05T06:43:00.000-08:00ermm..ok...i think i get wat u mean..hehe..thanks ...ermm..ok...i think i get wat u mean..hehe..thanks for d piece of advice..florahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15330772525133881587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-33503197322573027292008-03-05T06:37:00.000-08:002008-03-05T06:37:00.000-08:00Not bad at all!!! Personally, I think you elaborat...Not bad at all!!! Personally, I think you elaborated a little too much on the movement of time, meaning the sun and the night. For me, the sun going down and the night dawns is the same, so its kind of repetitive. All in all, its very good, as long as the whole thing has a flow to it. The concept is to start it slow metaphorically, then slowly as it reaches the end, it all make sense. You can even give it a twist by repeating a few lines from the first verse at the last verse and make the readers go "oh, so thats how it progressed!" =pCursehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00543018924159288339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-20253073653062327772008-03-05T06:32:00.000-08:002008-03-05T06:32:00.000-08:00hahaha..ya ya..thx for d help..was thinkin abt leo...hahaha..ya ya..thx for d help..was thinkin abt leona's yesterday wen writing lor..my inspiration.hahaflorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15330772525133881587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-45229002455458966262008-03-05T06:26:00.000-08:002008-03-05T06:26:00.000-08:00=D better d hor? xD perasannya..*shakes head*=D better d hor? xD perasannya..*shakes head*§oŁЇtǺ®ÿ ®o§ěhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06551413175407908427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-67883092591993464892008-03-05T05:59:00.000-08:002008-03-05T05:59:00.000-08:00love the words of ur choice of words..dude..englis...love the words of ur choice of words..dude..english man..hehe..neways..d ending i was listenin to a few diff songs n blended it in..n i somehow got d LIFE word to fit in..so yeah..it gave me my title..=p if u free help me work on d ending la..hehe..florahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15330772525133881587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5524895564415394542.post-26200076677108956012008-03-05T05:44:00.000-08:002008-03-05T05:44:00.000-08:00show me the meaning of being lonely....so many wor...show me the meaning of being lonely....<BR/><BR/>so many words from the broken heart<BR/>its hard to see in this crimson love<BR/>so hard to breathe walk with me and maybe<BR/>night to light to soon become<BR/>wild and free i can feel the sun<BR/>your every wish will be done...<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>tra lalala...<BR/>hahahahaha...well....eh so busy singing till i lupa mau say what about ur blog...whats with the so many morn?? MORN! I mourn...=(<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>so anyway...I love the words of your choice of words...really nice words used....the flow not really smooth but...I REALLY LIKE THE WORDS USED! not bad the metaphors! fwoaah... what gotten into u to write la??!! the starting all good...the ending i abit puzzled..=/§oŁЇtǺ®ÿ ®o§ěhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06551413175407908427noreply@blogger.com